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College Essays & UC PIQs

Clear, practical guidance to help families understand what strong college essays communicate—and how students can protect the authentic voice that makes their writing their own.

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The Common App Essay

What Admissions Officers Are Looking For

The Common App personal statement helps admissions officers understand the person behind the application. Strong essays reveal personality, perspective, and the experiences that shape how a student thinks. An extraordinary story isn't necessary. Authenticity is key.

The Questions I Ask

“Do I learn something about your student that I couldn't learn from the rest of their application? What makes them unique? What do they value? What is interesting about them that helps me understand who they are?”

What We're Looking For

Authentic VoicePersonal InsightReflection & GrowthSpecificity & DetailNarrative & FocusIndividualityBeyond the Application

Authentic Voice

The student's personality comes through in their observations, humor, word choices, and imperfections. The writing feels natural and unmistakably their own.

Includes guidance on protecting a student's authentic voice in the age of AI.

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UC Personal Insight Questions

What Admissions Officers Are Looking For

The University of California's Personal Insight Questions help admissions officers understand students' experiences, interests, accomplishments, and circumstances. Unlike the Common App essay, these responses are opportunities to communicate meaningful information directly and specifically.

The Question I Ask

“After reading these four responses, do I understand what your student has experienced, what matters to them, what they've contributed, and, most importantly, what they've learned?”

What We're Looking For

Direct ResponseSpecific EvidenceStudent's RoleDepth of ExperienceReflection & GrowthAuthentic VoiceClarity & PurposeApplication Context

Reflection & Growth

The student explains what they learned, deepened their understanding of, or discovered about themselves or others, and why that insight matters.

Includes guidance on protecting a student's authentic voice in the age of AI.